Hi
year 4.
We really need your help. Miss Hutton, Miss Garlick and I have been
writing a letter to Mrs Dye about our school trip to London zoo. We need you to
check it for us. Can you check that our spelling, punctuation and grammar are
correct? Can you check for errors and re-write it below with the corrections.
Thank
you Year 4 teachers.
Dear mrs dye
Year 4 would like your permission to go to
london zoo on tuesday 20th may 2014 we will be traveling by train
from hainault staton and we will walked through regents park to the zoo
we will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spnd
time looking around the zoo.
we hop to arrived back at school at 4.30am.
The children will realy enjoy the day adn
it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
Thankyou
Miss hutton, miss Henderson and miss
garlick
Dear Mrs DyeYear 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be traveling by train from Hainault Station and we will walk through Regents Park to the zoo. We will eat lunch at 12:00 pm then spend time looking around the zoo.We hope to arrive back at school at 4:30pm.The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic Home Sweet Home.Thank you.
ReplyDeleteMiss Hutton, Miss Henderson and Miss Garlick
Dear Mrs Dye,
ReplyDeleteYear 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday, 20th May 2014. We will be traveling by train from Hainault Station and we will walked through Regents Park to the zoo.
We will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the zoo.
We hope to arrive back at school at 4.30pm.
The children will realy enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic: 'home sweet home.'
Thank you
Pratyaksh
4z