Thursday, 12 December 2013

English Homework - Due in 17th December

Write a paragraph describing this picture. Think about everything we have learnt about using adjectives and connectives. Remember all the different sentence openers you could include to make your writing more interesting.

Why is the elephant on water ski's? Where is he going? Is he in a competition? What other animals could water ski?


12 comments:

  1. This big fat elephant is water skieing because it is looking for its friends so it is water skieng with humans to find it's friends on another island. For some reason this Elephant is competing in a compertiton and has a problem which one to do first. His friends are more important but on the other hand he wants to win gold.

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  2. The gigantic elephant is on water ski's because he need's to get to the end of the competition wich is at the end of the lake.Who do you think will win the race?The elephant is also going to the island to see his famaly and friends.

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  3. Maybe the elephant is on it because its versing other wild animals like leaping leopeads, perfect peacocks.
    Its going to start in 5 minutes the race.


    Naila

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  4. Oh finally! Regardless of all the troubles, the elephant's brave,courageous and gallant human friends rescued him from the horrid and cruel circus. Now, he is on his way, over the river, going back to his family to the island where all his loving relatives are waiting for him impatiently and egarly. All the credit goes to his human friends for helping him and now are taking him on the skiboard 'cause he wasn't fitting on the miniature boat.



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  5. The Enormous elephant is getting ready for a long water ski race but on the other hand he was scared of water. Some people in a boat, was pulling the elephant because he couldn't ski by himself. So he decided that he will be brave and WIN a lifetime supply of tasty food and of course the people who pulled the elephant will get 1.5 million!!!

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  6. a poor elephant sick and he could not walk he was crying for help he waited two days the elephant said
    oh someone is her to help me up he took him back to London the skaters gone to the queen palace
    the queen was elated to see his big elphant

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  7. The big giant elephant legs were broken then suddenly he fall down then landed on a ski.
    then he got stuck. He saw a dinousar the elephant was saying for help the dinousar broke the ski whith his leg.The elephant and the dinousar were best friends forever

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  8. The colossal elephant found a ski. As he is a humoungous animal with a miniature brain he did not know what it was,he decided to call it the thingamabob,he was beaming proudly because he thought of a name suiting it. He jumped with it but unlucky for him he jumped in the ice cold sea. The wind was howling and the breeze stung his cheeks he never thought in his head of skiing but it was so fun , while he had fun skiing he thought of other exciting things that might come across in his life!

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  9. the elephant wanted to have a advensure so he got on the ski and zoomed to the noth pole and suddenly frozz and luckly same pegen hleped him.

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  10. The massive elephant loved water and wanted to experience something creative with water. One amazing bright day, the elephant saw strange men along the beach setting up the water ski and saw them going off. He felt really amazed! So he went near them and stood up on the water ski, at that moment, the men knew this elephant was an extraordinary elephant. So they helped it getting secured, and the elephant experienced that fun and joyful moment on water skis.

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  11. Shashwath Pandivel16 December 2013 at 11:30

    This huge,gigantic and majestic elephant does not know swimming.He was missing his lovely family.Somehow he wanted to cross the river and go to the island,where his family lives.So he was very brave and he learnt water sking.Good humans helped him to cross the river and the elephant lived happily ever after.It is always good to free animals instead of keeping them in cages.

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  12. The massive enorumas elephant love's his skies so he went versing
    his friends for a compotition.He was finding the cheeta his very best
    friend he loved to have races with cheeta because the cheeta was
    very fast and the elephant could take big steps.

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