English Homework
Thursday 28th November 2013 to be done by Tuesday 3rd
December 2013
Can you up level these sentences?
Write them
below. Can you use any adjectives? Similes? Sentence Openers? Connectives?
Punctuation?
1) It is cold
outside.
2) The dog barked.
3) He was
scary.
4) He looked
at her.
5) They walked
down the street.
1) It was a dark,gloomy night it was so frozen outside nobody walked out of their houses.
ReplyDelete2) As I was walking around the pond I heard a fluffy, cute dog bark it echoed nearly the whole park that everyone in the park heard it.
3) Halloween had arrived, everyone was dressing up. But there was a knock on the door a weird one , as I opened the door I screamed as loud as I could "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" everyone stopped what they were doing and looked at me if I were a a pair of shoes. The scary boy who arrived murmured "Trick or treat".
4) I asked the funny man " one vanilla ice cream with a flake on top please" using my manners. After he scooped the ice cream on top and squished the flake in . He smiled at me very kindly.
5) Me and my mum was going shopping! As I crossed the road with my mum's hand holding on tightly.
Naila
"Mum said that it is freezing outside"said Sarah.
ReplyDeleteOne cloudly day a huge , brown dog barked so lould that the noise nealy blocked my ears!
The huge,hariy monster was scary.
He looked at her very supishosly as he did his work.
Mum and Dad skipped happly down the street.
1 "come in come in it is so cold out side"shouted Zoe.
ReplyDelete2 demi shut the door as the dog barked.
3 "that film was so terrifying"screamed sammy.
4 tom looked at the girl as she passed by.
5 zelda and mario zoom down the street.
1.It is time for a hot chocolate with marshmallows on Christmas Eve as it is extremely cold outside.
ReplyDelete2.The huge, brown spotted dog named Harry barked as loud as thunderstorm so everyone was frightened.
3.On Halloween, my friend Pratham was looking extremely scary as, he was dressed up as a devil with sharp long fingernails and pointed sharp teeth.
4.He stared at her angrily because his younger sister threw his favourite book in the dustbin.
5.They walked down the long winding street of the attractive and old village, enjoying a beautiful sunset behind the snow-clad hills.
1) Suddenly it was freezing outside.
ReplyDelete2) The old and rusty dog barked and barked for it's owner,
3) The little boy put on a zombie mask with blood all over it and he looked so scary.
4) The stupid teenager looked at the beautiful, smart teenager.
5) The family ran down the street ran down the flashing street trying to catch ASDA before it closes.
1. Outside it is freezing as water from Antarctic Ocean.
ReplyDelete2. The wild, beastly dog barked as loud as 90 lions and the whole city heard it.
3.'Ahhh,' screamed Mike as he zoomed past Sacl, his best friend who was dressed as a vampire.
4. Creepily, Jake looked at a girl eating so quickly that she finished her burger in 190 seconds.
5. Zack and his dog walked down the street and at the same they were spying at someone.
it is freezing outside.
ReplyDeleteThe dog was constantly barking .
he looked terrifying .
he steared at her.
they crolled down the steet.
It was really freezing outside.
ReplyDeleteThe dog barked so loud that all the country complained.
I saw this ugly scary ghost he looked scaryer then frekin style.
Mr bean looked at sponge bob while he was playing with Teedy.
Zack and Max waiked down the street faster then u say bolt.
1) It is freezing like the antartica outside.
ReplyDelete2)The creapy looking dog viciously baked at me.
3)The man looked like a vampire , it felt like halloween.
4)Mike looked at Lucy suspiciously while running to his mum.
5)As Mike and Lucy walked down the street Jack Mike's best friend bumped into them.
1) "My senses are telling me that it is freezing outside!" exclaimed Mike.
ReplyDelete2) The adorable pup was barking wildly as he roamed the animal shelter.
3) Suddenly, as quick as light a human raced down the vandalized streets as I flung open the door " he must be mad." I murmured to myself, then he turned around and stared at me, I ducked the crawled into my house.
4) A strange stranger had his eyes fixed upon me as I was trying to reach the huge book when i got it i hurried away.
5) I zoomed down the street looking to the right and left to escape, then my friend Mikeal chased after me!
1) Outside, in the vaste lost area, it is as cold as the North Pole.
ReplyDelete2) The dog barked and got scared at the bad people as they had seen a ghost
3) When I went to the shops, I saw a man standing there looking at me with dark black eyes and looked as scary as the demon.
4)He looked at her as if she was his long lost child and cried.
5) They walked down the street, holding hands, looking happy.
1: It is as freezing as ice outside today.
ReplyDelete2:When my dog barked all the trees shaked and people came to complain.
3:When I saw a man named jack I was really scared because he had a really scary face.
4:Jack looked suspiciously at Jane.
5:Jack and Jane strolled together as they walked down the street.
1)"It is so cold"said Ameya while Tanvi was trying to find a war clothe to keep them warm.
ReplyDelete2)Everyone in the town could not sleep with the loud,wild and terrifying dog barking all night.
3) Rose was lost in the middle of no were but then she saw a man looking at a map so she went to ask the man.As soon she put her hand on the mans shoulder he turned and the she saw a terrifying face and ran away.
4) Sammy was choosing which toy to take for his daughter Lucy.When he fell a man got his eyes fixed on Sammy.
5)"Hurry before they catch us" Max said.Tow robbers was chasing Max and Harry for there golden chains.Suddenly Harry got caught and Max had tow choices if he should save Harry or run.
They walked down the street.
1) It was freezing outside like the iceberg that the Titanic hit.
ReplyDelete2) The fierce dog howled louder than a TV at maximum volume.
3) The creepy slimy bloodied zombie was terrifying me to death.
4) The doctor examined the young lady's appendix.
5) The Simpsons dashed down the brightly lit street.
1)It was a freezing morning outside when we were going to the museum and it was as cold as ice.
ReplyDelete2)I had a cute,brown and a big dog which was tied to the gate.He barked so loudly that I had to free him quickly.
3)One of my friend in a Halloween party was dressed up as vampire and he was as scary as a monstrous wolf.
4)When John was walking down the street he saw a gorgeous girl who was as beautiful as a princess and he was staring and glaring at her.
5)My parents were driving home but their car broke down so they decided to walk down the street.