Friday 26 April 2013

Literacy homework 26-4-13

Literacy homework 26-4-13
Poetry writing

This week we have been learning about poetry and  beginning to write our own poems.
Use what you have been learning this week to write your own poem about a magic box and add it using the comments box to this post.

Example:

I will put in the box
A golden sunrise shimmering on the ocean waves.
The sound of butterflies fluttering in the breeze
The taste of my favourite ice cream
A smile from my baby sister

Now have a go and make your own.
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14 comments:

  1. Jaime Shaw26 April 2013 at 08:49

    I will put in the box:

    My pet fish Rosie
    A gold pot
    A beautiful butterfly
    and the first smile of my baby sister Holly.

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    1. Jaime Shaw2 May 2013 at 11:14

      Miss I will type more.

      I will put in the box

      My pet fish Rosie
      A solid gold pot
      A beautiful butterfly flapping its soft wings
      The first smile of my cute, baby sister Holly
      My 3DS XL
      A no swearing sign
      Respect from me and others
      Gold and silver
      My iPad that has lots of games in it
      My favourite film
      The kisses of my sister
      The giggle from my sister
      and the bluest waterfall made out of a colourfull rainbow.

      My box is fashioned from melted chocolate
      The lid has the shinyest top ever
      The hinges are made of solid gold

      I shall visit delisious chocolate land in my box
      Where all the children eat and eat
      It is my secret place when it is bed time
      and chocolate land is where all your wishes come true!!!

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  2. Tanvi chadalawada26 April 2013 at 11:03

    I will put in the box
    2 people from India dancing
    A person talking Telugu
    My best work
    I will put in the box

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  3. Tahmid26 April 2013 at 11:22

    I will put in the box
    A first smile of a baby
    My favourite ice-cream
    My first birthday
    My memories

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  4. Pratyaksh Gupta26 April 2013 at 11:24

    I will put in my box
    The time when I was born
    My favorite lollipop
    My first word I spoke

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  5. Madison Thompson27 April 2013 at 04:34

    I will put in my box,
    All of my memories.
    My favouite kind of butterfly,
    A photo of my dad,
    A kiss and a cuddle from my family.

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  6. Naila27 April 2013 at 05:22

    I will put in the box
    My first word
    My first smile
    My first walk
    And my whole life

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  7. Jia sharma27 April 2013 at 07:57

    I will put it in the box
    My famly love
    My very special treasures
    A pictchur of a swand
    I will put it in the box

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  8. johnbramstonprimary28 April 2013 at 02:25

    Wow 3C such lovely poems well done. Mrs Cheek :)

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  9. ibrahim/riyadh28 April 2013 at 04:34

    I will put in the box

    my familys love
    my first smile
    a sip from the greatest ribena in the world
    fire from the nostrils of a dragon
    a cowboy on a white cow
    and a witch with claws

    my box is gold and silver and platnium

    Then i saw a big gorilla

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  10. AZAN AHMAD28 April 2013 at 09:52

    i will put in the box loly pop so
    it can grow biger and i could
    eat it

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    1. Harvey29 April 2013 at 08:57

      I will put in the box
      my first smile
      my family
      my lego
      riding my bike
      the taste of noodles and chicken
      my favourite treat chocolate



































































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  11. Shashwath Pandivel29 April 2013 at 13:28

    I will put in the magic box
    Love of my dad and my little brother
    My shiny and bright fruit painting and solar system painting
    My colourful bowling pins and balls
    Taste of banana shake...

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  12. Honey Murad6 May 2013 at 11:57

    I will put in the box

    all of my family memories,
    a family photo,
    a picture of me and my sister and
    my birthday video

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