Thursday 20 March 2014

20.03.14 English Homework

A Letter of Complaint

Imagine that you've been feeling poorly and have taken some medicine to help you get better. Imagine that instead of making you better (doing what it said on the bottle) the medicine has actually done something unexpected to you. Perhaps the medicine has made you bigger or smaller. Maybe the medicine has changed you into something else, do you now have super powers?

What you have to do is write a letter of complaint to the people who made the medicine. Make sure that you tell them what has happened to you. Tell them what things you now find difficult because of the effects of the medicine (you could also mention anything that you find easier!). Tell them exactly what you want them to do about the situation and why.


Remember to set out your letter correctly!

16 comments:

  1. Dear Hospital,

    How dare you give me that medicine! I have grown the size of my house and I look rediculous with my tiny arms! Everyone runs away from we when I try to talk to them or play with them and all i can cuddle now is a bumblebee, or any other incects. Well, at least when I travel the world it takes me less than a week. And with my tiny arms I can make people think my hand\fingers is an incect. But I want to become the normal me again!!!!!!!!!!!! Now something else is hapening . . . my voice is getting sqeakier!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. Dear Pharmacy
    You have recently gave me xbolical 10000 for a medicine but i found it was TOOTHPASTE! my throart has turned really big like a frog inflating its throat to make a load croak I do not want to go school tomorrow because of my throat a bulldozer is coming your way and I will love the"CRASH" and "BOOM" "SCREECH' "SMASH"
    sincerly Ibrahim Miah

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  3. Dear John Bramston pharmacy,
    Today I was trying your honey flavored medicine and then I started flying in the air with roller skates attached to my feet. The good thing about this is I can fly to the shop to and not have to walk. I would like you to make a Crusoe for this.
    Your sincerely Aisha

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  4. Dear mr john your medicine has gave me more pain in my arm.I stink like fart harvey and mathew dont
    even taik to me it even makes me jump in space everytime i speak i want you to meet me at my house
    and change the medicine if you dont i will taik to your boss.Your medicine makes me have orange hair
    when im angry.

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  5. 15 kingsley mews
    Ley street
    essex IG6 3AW

    Dear pharmacy,
    HOW COULD YOU GIVE ME SUCH A CRAZY MEDICINE!!!! Do you know what it has turned me into?
    ---- A SUPERHERO!!!!!!!!

    I can fly around the world, less than 1 minute and fight bad people using my superpowers.My body has become as tall as Eiffel Tower so everybody is running away from me as if I am a scary giant monster.
    While flying around London,at supersonic speed,I saw a thief snatching some gold from a lady on the street but as fast as possible I tied him around the pole.
    While I was there,I spun a strong web around the thief, consequently he became helpless. Poor lady, how scared she was!!

    Now, the worst effect of this medicine is that nobody in my family recognizes me.My young sister,who used to love me a lot, is running away from me as if I am a ghost.

    Is it possible for you guys that can you please take the negative part of the medicine, which is to change my height back to normal, but do not remove my superpowers. If you can do what I have said that will be great and awesome.

    Yours sincerely
    Pratyaksh

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  6. NewView Pharmacy
    35 Covent Garden St. Martin’s Lane WC2E 4RO
    Dear Pharmacist,
    I am writing this letter to inform you that the medicine named ‘X50-SuperStart’ you have given me to cure my sore throat on Saturday 15th February 2014 has done something unexpected. My arm pit smell so disgusting and I have turned as big as The Leaning Tower of Pizza. I can also turn invisible every 5 minute which is really annoying and people are bumping on me every time. The only good thing is that I am as fast as a Lamborghini Veono S Roadster and I could read peoples mind. Whenever I come near someone I read there mind straight away and my brain get so stuffed that I get extremely crazy.
    It makes me physically and mentally distressed and changed my behaviour pattern unusually and undesirably. People think of me as a giant ghost and are scared of me. I can’t believe how a pharmacist like you can do such a big mistake.
    Could you please give me the correct and appropriate medicine to cure my disease and return me back to normal? If you can’t create the right medicine soon enough, I will take legal action against you through my solicitor which might cause you a huge compensation. Moreover I will refer the same case to the police.
    Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
    Thanking you Tahmid

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  7. Dear Mr Thompson,

    I am very upset because I payed £20.00 for your medicine and instead of it making me better it has made me invisible!!! All though I can get to places with out people knowing when I walk people bump into me and I fall over!

    I would like you to give me my money back and give me the right medicine. I will never by another thing from your shop again!

    Yours sincerely
    Madison

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  8. Dear Doc

    What have you done to me! I am clearly one of your experiments, I will get you struck off.

    I now float everywhere, I cannot sit down and eat my Dinner and I have to be anchored to the house or I would float away. Imagine how hard it is to use the toilet!!!

    I only came in for a runny nose, what's going on?

    I cannot touch anything as that ends up floating too, my dad tried picking me up from Cubs the other day but the instant I touched the door handle the car started floating away.you better have a diagnose in two two days or i will get you the sack.
    unhappy from harvey.

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  9. Dear Hospital

    I have taken your medicine I was thinking that it is going to help me, but it just made my fingers bigger and if I want to ring my friends I just keep pressing random buttons and I never can ring my friends if you will NOT! help me I will never buy any medicine's in your hospital.

    Ola

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  10. Willows Practice
    Manford Way
    Chigwell
    Essex
    IG7 4DF
    To whom it may concern,

    I am writing regarding the medicine you prescribed me on the 26th February 2014. The medicine has left me with horrifying side effects which I am extremely unhappy about.

    After 5 days of taking regular doses of the liquid I found that my ears were growing enormously huge. Even though I could hear excellently, people would always stare at me, point and laugh. This made me feel very upset and I felt like everybody was judging me which isn't fair at all!

    Has this ever happened before? Is there anything I can do for me to go back to normal? What do you plan on doing about this?

    Please get back to me as soon as possible!

    Regards,
    Hanife Murad

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  11. Dear Tesco pharmacy I have taken your cough medicine and surprisingly it has made me INVISIBLE!!
    It is cool because people can go through me. I can pick up some things like forks and boxes but I can pick up the phone or the door so I have to go out the garden
    I got a letter from my work saying if I don’t come on Monday next week I am fired!! I can’t talk to my friends on the phone and they can’t see me. Is there a cure to stop this help I am really and angry!!

    From Diego = (

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  12. Dear pharmacist,
    I've been trying your medicine but it didn't cure me it turned me into a ghost what were you thinking? I can float and run through anything.
    Sometimes I cant eat anything at all.And especially I cant play spots I want a re-fun.
    From Jeevan

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  13. Dear,pharmacy,

    The medicen that you gace me for my arm has done the complete oposite of what it was ment to do!
    my armes have stretched so mush I have to open the window to put them down.I have been turned into a half giant.

    on the bright side I can lie in bed watchig tv while cleening my bed room however I keep on knocking over the vase of flowers.I cant even get out of my house because I have a gate around it and my arms wont fit. Every time I take a dose my arms grow.

    please change the medicin and give something to make me normal again.

    kind regards
    Jia

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  14. Dear Pharmacy,

    I was really grateful that you gave me a medicine that would cure my chicken pox but suddenly something happened to my body it turned into a balloon, I was so shocked really! I complained to my Mum about this , she visited you last Thursday and complained about it with one of your staff (Chloe), she said to come back next Monday for a new medicine to cure the air balloon that has happened to me.. But now a new problem has happened I've got more chicken pox. This is getting worse and worse. I've missed 6 weeks of school , the teachers are getting really furious at me because I have missed school nearly 6 whole weeks!

    But, the best thing is if I've turned into a air balloon I can quickly open my window and go to some cool places like beaches, London eye all that stuff! But you ruined my face I have to put a paper bag over my face so no-one can see my hideous face!!!

    Please Pharmacy my teacher are getting angry with me because I missed 6 whole weeks of education and I have to hide my face from the whole globe and its not nice so please help! I will really appreciate it. Thanks

    Yours sincerely
    Naila

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  15. March 24th,2014.
    From
    Shashwath,
    Raphael House,
    Ilford.

    To
    The Pharmacist,
    Ilford.

    Subject:Letter of complaint.

    Sir,
    I have a very awful experience after having your medicine.I have become INVISIBLE.Kids bump into me,my little brother gets frightened because he can hear me but not see me.My mom and dad are worried about this issue.I am not able to play with my friends as usual.so can you please set me right.i want to be normal again as soon as possible.
    Thank you.

    Yours faithfully,
    Shashwath.

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  16. Dear hospital
    How dare you give me a crazy strechey medicine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will complain about you to the police that you gave me a fake medicine and you will go to prison for 10 years.And you might even lose your job for ever you will never be a doctor again because what you have done to me .I will tell your family why you have gone to prison and what you have done to me if you stop making fake medicine then you might have your job back again.

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